"Jefferson Davis"

Good deal. If it works, I suggest you re-enter the redone Jefferson as Jefferson Davis II. It you try to change the picture all the dialog and your votes here will vanish. Something to consider.

Thanks! I'll check it and see if my photo editing software has something similar.

Understood Diondra. Checked the link. You are right. The picture looks like I thought it should. Just excellent craftsmanship. I envy your skill. I find that using the autofix in the Photoshop program helps make my entries look as close to the real thing as possible. Not a bad method to use.

There is a big difference between the photo entered and the one linked to but I think I'll be the 'odd guy out' and say that I prefer the look the lighter/scanned one entered gives...a sort of faded with time ambiance that suits the era of the subject.

Hi guys, thanks so much for your comments! Caleb and Carl, believe me, I used all kinds of 5B and 6B! ;) The drawing is, in fact, darker than what it appears to be in this photo. The reflection from the scan has given it a light overcast, an issue that I haven't quite been able to get around yet. This photo here: http://tinyurl.com/p8jsxc2
is a much more accurate depiction of the real color. Regrettably I was in a hurry when entering, and didn't use the the correct picture.

agreed^ go dark where needed and make it pop

Love it!

I see 2b and 4b pencil work with a smudge stick. Excellent representation of form. But it could be so much better with some 6b or fine charcoal shading in the darker areas. It lacks chiaroscuro. With darkened shadows where they belong this could become a three dimensional portrait. I would love to see the improvement. You have the skill, just take the deep breath, forget the fear and go for it.