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Postby karieokie » Thu May 15, 2008 9:11 am

Hello everyone, I am so happy to have found a group that speaks the truth. I would like to know your opinion of my work.
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Postby Erika Takacs » Thu May 15, 2008 11:29 am

Karieokie, welcome to our site! I like this painting very much. Very interesting style and pleasant to look at. I like those hanging vines from the tree. I'm not sure what the tail-looking hanging thing is, seems to be out of place. Overall very good work.
Ah, I think is foliage and on a second look, you would have too much empty space without it.
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Postby XELain » Wed May 21, 2008 2:17 am

8) I say welcome too, and I like how your leaves hang down, great color! The animal looks as if all is encroaching on his/her territory and everybody needs to stop . I like this painting a lot. :)
Classic fibers,
ing its slate
Thirst my journey's roam. . .

Darkened light, a candle's plate
Creative image is sewn
4-11-08
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Postby BAReam » Wed May 21, 2008 9:31 am

Welcome... I see a pointalist/impressionist (tree leaves- small dots of color) and the expressionists (orange) influences. Would like to see some P/I painting style distributed more evenly through the work. Also believe extending the foreground just a but, giving somewhat more depth would be an improvement. Overall, I would say this is a very nice begining. Let's see more!

all the best... BAReam
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