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Postby rodeodave2003 » Sun May 04, 2008 5:42 pm

Here's another of my favorites. Would appreciate your honest opinions.
Thanks dave
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Postby XELain » Tue May 20, 2008 6:52 am

8) Very nice, however, it looks like the painting is cut off on the horned man(is it cut off ?). It looks, to me, that the woman is going to slap him at any moment! LOL
Classic fibers,
ing its slate
Thirst my journey's roam. . .

Darkened light, a candle's plate
Creative image is sewn
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Postby BAReam » Tue May 20, 2008 10:17 am

Rodeodave;

Let me begin by saying the painting quality isn't bad.. actually fairly nicely done. However, the subjects appear to be quite "staged" and somehow out of character for the subject, which I feel would better serve as a "suggestion" versus and overt act. But realistically, those are just my sensibilities coming into play.

all the best... BAReam
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Postby rodeodave2003 » Wed May 21, 2008 2:19 am

Hello, XELain, and BAReam,
I thought I'd got it but hadn't LOL the pic. was cut off.
However, the composition was staged, quite purposely. Intended to show a sense of amusement on her part. thus the title Silly Old Goat. Any suggstions on how to achieve this differently ?
Thanks again, Dave
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Postby BAReam » Wed May 21, 2008 9:43 am

Dave... giving us a title on this one would have helped interpret it a little better. Given the explanation... my impression is better! Showing some active resistance {subtle} might enhance the theme as well, as I'm not seeing that here... will look some more.

all the best ... Bruce
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Postby rodeodave2003 » Wed May 21, 2008 10:07 am

Thanks again BAReam,
It seems that I'm leaving out a lot of important info. I really thought I had given the title. But it turns out I only did that in my gallery. I'll try to do better.
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Postby BAReam » Wed May 21, 2008 10:12 am

You are forgiven :wink:
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