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Postby sylvian1970 » Sun Oct 13, 2019 4:36 pm

please give me an honest opinion
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Re: honest feedback please

Postby sylvian1970 » Fri Oct 25, 2019 5:16 pm

ok that bad i guess,:(
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Re: honest feedback please

Postby Singular » Sun Oct 27, 2019 8:48 am

I do not think this is bad at all. Actually like a lot about it. The colors and design are very good. My main complaint is the cleanliness of the lines and the squiggles. The background is very nice. I think the squiggles take away from that. The focal area looks to be a bit rushed. The lines are not as clean as I would like and the colors appear a bit smeared rather than blended. But there is a lot of potential here. Nice work overall.
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Re: honest feedback please

Postby sylvian1970 » Mon Oct 28, 2019 8:24 pm

ty so much for your honest feedback, this really helps me learn. It was all done with a knife and just smearing paint. However, i struggled, personally i dont like it at all, my husband loves it, i have no idea why. I guess each to their own. I told him, i dont wish to list this for sale and actually was going to throw it out. He insisted i dont lol, I have no idea if i can even fix it, its just one i cannot even look at, haha it infuriates me actually.
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Re: honest feedback please

Postby jenn_iam » Wed Oct 30, 2019 7:05 pm

Hi Sylvian, I really like the marriage between the geometric to the abstract colors... I am not a fan of the drip-swirls so much, but do very much like the radiating hues in the background contrasting against the more solid tones in the shapes.
May your world be painted in the Brightest of colors!

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(All mediums; Conceptual Design, Costume Creation, to Application)
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