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Marionettes

Postby sueg » Fri Aug 14, 2015 6:14 pm

This is an acrylic painting I recently completed which measures 24 x 30. Any comments will be greatly appreciated.
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Re: Marionettes

Postby CarlOwen » Sat Aug 15, 2015 7:35 am

Well, of course, I like it. This painting is superbly rendered. It does make me want to see it again and again.
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Re: Marionettes

Postby jenn_iam » Mon Jan 11, 2016 8:49 pm

I think this piece is stunning... I wouldn't change a thing... It has a haunting appeal that really is interesting... well done.
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Re: Marionettes

Postby Eralune » Mon Feb 29, 2016 4:51 pm

The first thing that comes to my mind is that the marionettes seem to blend in with the background just a little too much, and the proportions on the left and right marionettes are a bit off. It's almost there (and by there I mean where I would consider it "done") but you need to tweak it just a little but more.

So I would increase the contrast between the marionettes and the background, and I would fix the body proportions of the bodies. I love it though, it's absolutely beautiful!
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