by jenn_iam » Mon Jan 11, 2016 12:35 pm
Hi Yoli, I love the texture in this...one thing I notice, is the the continuation of same stroke movement in sky and land, with building strokes and movement vertical.. Its not bad, just catches the eye. Love the direct contrasts in the barn...Think the greenery and the foreground could use a little more work especially that this piece is portrait vs landscape... which diminishes the barn with the negative space a bit. However you are on a good path with it..Keep it going.
May your world be painted in the Brightest of colors!
Jennifer Erin
-Artist/Illustrator / Film/Media Designer & SFX MakeUp / Storyboard Artist
(All mediums; Conceptual Design, Costume Creation, to Application)