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Charcoal drawing

Postby Ben123 » Mon Aug 27, 2012 6:39 am

Hi, this is a charcoal drawing I finished recently. Please let me know what you think..
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Re: Charcoal drawing

Postby Cristo » Tue Aug 28, 2012 7:00 pm

I like it. That bench up there looks so cut and clean. But down at the bottom the houses look too crowded in on each other.
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Re: Charcoal drawing

Postby bapman » Thu Aug 30, 2012 9:50 pm

This is very good...I feel like I have seen this place before.
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Re: Charcoal drawing

Postby pia » Thu Sep 13, 2012 12:03 pm

I really like the contrast between the empty bench and the crowded houses below.
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Re: Charcoal drawing

Postby ehoeveler » Thu Sep 13, 2012 8:02 pm

Love the bench - I agree with Cristo about the houses.
Also, there's no difference in value
within the houses and I would like to see them softened
even a tad more so as not to 'fight with' the benches.
Keep up the good work!
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Re: Charcoal drawing

Postby ivo55 » Fri Sep 14, 2012 2:17 am

It looks so dramatic after the rain. Is it?
I think it is amazing.
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Re: Charcoal drawing

Postby Jwalk » Sat Oct 17, 2015 11:20 pm

Great study , Is this from life. Life is always harder to get perspective completely correct.
If it wasn't maybe laying a couple of grid lines would be beneficial. I always find when I do that I'm always surprised at where a line is as opposed to where I thought it would have been if I didn't have a grid. Of course it great to also draw without a grid too want to keep it loose as well.

Either way I like your style.
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