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Just finished this pic

Postby sandeep.3dmax » Sun Jan 08, 2012 6:02 am

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Re: Just finished this pic

Postby Singular » Sun Jan 08, 2012 12:23 pm

Hi Sandeep,

I can't see the image. This link requires me to log in. Can you upload the image here?

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Re: Just finished this pic

Postby sandeep.3dmax » Sun Jan 08, 2012 1:50 pm

Hi
Not able to upload as the image size is big. But have corrected the link.
Sorry for the inconvenience
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Re: Just finished this pic

Postby pretty1np1nkxoxo » Sat Jan 28, 2012 12:29 am

I feel like the face is too flat? I'm not positive but it seems to be lacking some bone structure.
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Re: Just finished this pic

Postby sharkbarf » Tue Feb 07, 2012 12:10 pm

Since the piece is so busy (which I like) the only relief your eyes get is around the child's face, which is the focal point.
That said, since my eyes immediately go there I think the drawn eyes looked forced. It's as if everything is realistic except the eyes which feel too large and flat.
If this sort of manga style is what your going for I'd suggest emphasizing them even more. If it's not, making them smaller and have more curve would really help.
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