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ruins of old church

Postby anka051991 » Thu Dec 15, 2011 11:29 am





please give me some feedback I really need an honest critique! :)
size: 30/40 cm
medium: oil on canvas
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Re: ruins of old church

Postby Artifex » Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:45 pm

Very nice color harmony I like the swirling motion of the brushstrokes very neat and eye catching. You might want to watch this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P6E1M-kY ... DQ&lf=plcp it gives a lot of tips about painting.
For painting tips and DVDs check out www.oilpaintingworkshop.com
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Re: ruins of old church

Postby jenn_iam » Wed Feb 15, 2012 2:50 pm

I really like the texture of the building.. but it currently looks like its floating or stuck onto the canvas... giving a feeling of unnatural. sky color, is pretty, but with the other tones, I think it too is a bit on the cobalt side for a feeling of natural... its motions and movements are great!
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