First post on this site. "Zuni Warrior"

[Liquorcat]

I did this drawing in honor of the Native American Heritage Month. It is of coarse a ZUNI WARRIOR Done on Bristol Vellum, 11X14, graphite Clutch pencil 2h, hb 2b,4b 6b. I have been drawing for about 10 months now and would like some critiques on this drawing. Not
ave enough to put up on the "Ready for the Fury" yet. Thank you in advance for your advice!

[kcortese]

You did an excellent job on this piece.

10 months?

You are very talented, keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing more from you.

Karen

[Singular]

I agree. This is quite good for only 10 months experience.

all the best,
Joe

[Erika Takacs]

You have already developed a good grasp of technique and character in such a short time. Did you try drawing from live models? If you haven't I suggest try to do that as much as possible. Sketch as much as possible. I'm looking forward to more.

[BYart]

Excellent!!!!
Don't be afraid to post in Fury...everyone here is so helpful....they've really helped/are still helping me alot!

[Liquorcat]

You guys are very kind and I took your advice BYart and x posted this in Fury. See what happens!

[paulabettam]

hi wow if you have been doing this for 10months you have done fantastic you coptured him perfectly wirth so much detail well done from paula

[DaveL]

Very nice and welcome

[arlenemurals]

fantastic work

[amachristian]

I love how you can almost see right through the eyes as if looking inside of him. Such depth in those eyes! Wonderful sketch. You are very talented!

[Jenny]

10 months? You've got talent my friend! Some gentle critic; The eyes are really good, I like the contrast of dark and light you succeeded with there. I would like to see as big a contrast in the lower part of the face: the area between his chin and hair I think could be much darker. But maybe it is just reflections made while photographing and that it is much darker in reallife? Keep it up!!