Commission Portrait

[demac]

Help. I have gone wrong somewhere and I don't know where.

The two babies are from emailed photos but the girl and older boy are from a framed pic but the boy has a sullen face on him so I have tried to alter it to fit the rest of them but something is not right.

Any ideas on the young lad on the right?????????

Deanne

[johnwalkeasy]

Deanne, I see two things that might help. #1, the nose looks to be a little small and baby like for a child this age. #2. The mouth looks like it might not be right where it should me. Ofcourse working on the nose may address that issue as well. And maybe a little darkness under the eyes may
ing out the age of this child. Boys of this age usely have that after baseball pratice look about them.

[demac]

Thanks John

I showed them the image and they love it without changes...go figure..so now in the framer

Practice practice Practice :O)

[oilpainter2247]

I like this very much Deanne ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,i love the eyes you did here ..............very nice work indeed.mike

[nigelartist]

Hi its nigelartist...long time no speak.

I think the picturein itself is beautiful...

Maybe the boy could be used as the focal point. He looks quite serious and mature tome...a kind of fatherly figure.

Great work again!

[BYart]

Hi Deanne!
So nice to see your work again! Very nice sketch here...keep them coming please!

[ArtConsultant]

is a little off, but good start!

[arlenemurals]

the noses and general shapes of the heads are good, the irises in all the eyes are disprportionate to the heads and eyes themselves. The other thing I notice right away is the lack of mid tones. I think you have a very good start, keep going