2nd attempt at Abstract

[ae4u78]

Thanks to the valuable suggestion given by Juliep I have made a 2nd attempt to create one more abstract though not on a large scale as pervious looking forward to more such valuable suggestions

[BYart]

Hi,
I'm not really one to help with abstracts, as I haven't attempted any myself, but, I like the colors in this one! It almost has a stained glass effect. Look forward to more of your work!

[Juliep]

Wow! I can already see improvement, and it wasn't from my suggestion. This design is much more put together.

What medium are you using?

[ae4u78]

Thanks both of you for your apprication. I had a look at your works they are absolutely wonderful. they and your suggestions have given me inspiration for a new one which I shall post herein in a day or too. and Juliep your suggestion was most important as It inspired me to add shadows in this work which is done in Poster colour on paper. looking forward for such wonderful suggestions from both of you in the future plus I take this opportunity to invite others who do abstract for their views on the subject.
By the way can both of you take a look at my son's work posted in be gentle by the pen name vijart and post your views on it. personally I beileve he has more knowledge on colours than myself. thanks once again.

[oilpainter2247]

hello ae4u78 , i like this one . i dont have alot too say how you can improve how it looks , but it is to me a fun painting too look at , and find you have put a bit of time into thinking about it

nice job and keep on painting .have a wonderful night .mike

[ae4u78]

Thanks oilpainter for your wonderful views on the work and special thanks to Juliep whose views were expanded by the Art teacher of my son (vijart) resulting in me recreating the same diffrently. have a look and give me your views on it.