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Postby krysta11 » Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:18 am

Hello everyone,

Yesterday I looked at this painting and started to laugh. OMG! I noticed , that my girl is very flat and skinny. Anorexia. :lol: :lol:
It is one of my very first paintings. I can see now how unexperienced I was at that time. I did some changes to my painting and gave a different title.
"Piruett in the wind"

Do you think it looks better now?

Would like some honest comments. Thank you everyone.

krysta

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Postby johnwalkeasy » Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:04 pm

I like the colors in this work. And I think I see a ghost in the wind. Do you have a person close to you that might be in some danger. Maybe at war in the middle east? That kind of image pop into my mind. Ofcoure some people say I,m out of my mind.LOL.
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Postby krysta11 » Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:23 pm

johnwalkeasy wrote:I like the colors in this work. And I think I see a ghost in the wind. Do you have a person close to you that might be in some danger. Maybe at war in the middle east? That kind of image pop into my mind. Ofcoure some people say I,m out of my mind.LOL.


Hi John,

Thanks a lot for your input.
Your interpretation made me laugh. Actually I like it. :lol: :lol:
You scared me a bit, J. I tried to find your ghost and I could not see it.
:lol: :lol:
I fixed her hip, which drove me crazy. I hope the ghost is gone now.
I respect you John very much. I am out of my mind sometimes too. It happens to many artists J. :lol: :lol: We are not alone.

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Postby nigelartist » Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:42 pm

I think the scarf overdresses her. HAHA

Seriously, I like you red and black better.
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Postby krysta11 » Tue Apr 07, 2009 9:41 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
Nig you can always undress her in your mind. :oops:

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Postby Erika Takacs » Tue Apr 07, 2009 9:48 pm

I like the changes you've made, specifically the dark outline really makes a difference. It's perfect now. Yeah, the wind around her knee does have a ghost shape.
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Postby nigelartist » Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:08 pm

krysta11 wrote: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
Nig you can always undress her in your mind. :oops:

krysta


too old for that rubbish now.!!! HAHA

can you come on line for a little chat


its 3am here and im wide awake.
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Postby krysta11 » Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:32 pm

Erika Takacs wrote:I like the changes you've made, specifically the dark outline really makes a difference. It's perfect now. Yeah, the wind around her knee does have a ghost shape.


Erika I always knew it was your favourite painting of mine.
I liked it too but always felt I should do better job with my girl. Thank you for accepting my changes.
Love your interpretation.

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Postby krysta11 » Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:37 pm

neogenius44 wrote:
krysta11 wrote: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
Nig you can always undress her in your mind. :oops:

krysta


too old for that rubbish now.!!! HAHA

can you come on line for a little chat


its 3am here and im wide awake.


Dear Nig,

Thank you for inviting me for a little chat but with sadness I must tell you I am very busy. I am going away in a few days (700 km away from home)
I am preparing myself for my biggest artistic event . I am very excited and a bit nervous. I am sorry Nig.
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Postby nigelartist » Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:43 pm

krysta11 wrote:
neogenius44 wrote:
krysta11 wrote: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
Nig you can always undress her in your mind. :oops:

krysta


too old for that rubbish now.!!! HAHA

can you come on line for a little chat


its 3am here and im wide awake.


Dear Nig,

Thank you for inviting me for a little chat but with sadness I must tell you I am very busy. I am going away in a few days (700 km away from home)
I am preparing myself for my biggest artistic event . I am very excited and a bit nervous. I am sorry Nig.
krysta


no problems

have a great time
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