I like the painting...the style is unique. I see that it was done 5 years ago. Do you have anything recent that you could post here so we can see how your newer work compares?
The only suggestions that come in mind are:
1st painting: the right eye (wiewer side) is a bit 2 high
2nd painting: the naked body looks 2 pale/foged compared with clothes.
But that is just my opinion and I'm only human.
Otherways they are great!
It is better to be hated for what you are than to be loved for what you are not.