any comments on what i could have done

[Kev]

Any comments on what i could have done, or maybe not have done...

[ehoeveler]

Not touching this one! His eyes are full of light and wisdom - only thing I might do is darken some
not all, of the 'paper' edges. Ok, one more little thing...soften the lines that come down towards the
point of his nose just a little....Thank You, E

[Kev]

Hi E,
Tks for all the nice comments and on my other pictures, much appreciated, i just dont understand what you mean about darkening the papaer edges, like the actual boundary of the paper itself, but again
Tks
Kev

[ehoeveler]

Sorry - I meant the edges around his face. E