by Erika Takacs » Tue Jan 15, 2008 10:04 pm
Hey JOhn, you've been busy! And your style is changing. It's more mature, the lines are more flowing, better shading and contrast. The colours are still strong, but with nice transition. There's more focus and the
ushwork more confident. You've achieved a lot in a relaively short period of time. Good for you! I like your self-portrait and Ronnie's and the nude the best. Those impossible postures are really working for you, keep them! The only thing I don't like is her hair sticking out both sides. Try to make it more flowing and it should be positioned downwards. Overall, very strong showing, congrats!