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Whats your 2 cents worth?

Postby leah3 » Sun Oct 18, 2015 2:13 am

I call this Firey Heart. What would you do differently on this piece?
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Re: Whats your 2 cents worth?

Postby CarlOwen » Sun Oct 18, 2015 7:57 am

Good morning Suzette. As you are looking at it, I would crop the right side about in half leaving very little at the bottom, maybe about 1/5 and about 1/3 at the top. Those bright shapes next to the heart would stay and most of the dark red flames would be removed. By having one side shorter than the other side you will introduce the visual feel of movement. Right now it sort of looks like wings. Hope this helps.
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Re: Whats your 2 cents worth?

Postby leah3 » Sun Oct 18, 2015 9:31 pm

Thank you for your comments. I appreciate you taking the time. :)
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Re: Whats your 2 cents worth?

Postby eddieblz » Tue Oct 20, 2015 10:27 pm

Interesting piece. What medium did you use.
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