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working on this,is it done?

Postby zookeeper » Sun Aug 05, 2012 12:41 pm

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Re: working on this,is it done?

Postby Singular » Sun Aug 05, 2012 3:41 pm

This is good. Now you need to put the final touches. Use a very fine brush to add clean lines in the wall grout. Some of the areas look smudgy. Same thing for the ground. Also I see no shadows cast from the gate. There must be. The light source in the front. So the shadows will be somewhere behind the gate. It will help to add depth. The gate could also be a bit cleaner. It appears smudgy in areas as well. Try waiting until dry to overpaint. Use a bit more paint thinner or linseed oil to get a clean line. Overall, nice work.

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Re: working on this,is it done?

Postby zookeeper » Sun Aug 05, 2012 7:20 pm

Thanks for the advice,when I've made some changes I'll be back.
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Re: working on this,is it done?

Postby ivo55 » Wed Aug 15, 2012 2:36 am

Yes,
I completely agree with the above recommendations, however you can leave it as it is as I think you aren't after the pure realism.
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Re: working on this,is it done?

Postby ehoeveler » Mon Sep 17, 2012 10:13 pm

Hi, Zookeeper!
Are you ready to give us an update
on your Subway Lady? So cute with the mask!
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