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New Work

Postby aakritiarts » Fri Apr 27, 2012 5:30 am

I've completed my latest painting. Will appreciate any feedback. Thanks.
watercolor painting
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Re: New Work

Postby aurorastudios » Sun May 06, 2012 12:40 pm

The water looks nice, the ripples are realistic. The eye of the closest one seems to be a little too overpowering, maybe just darken the white to a gray? The eyelids of many animals usually hid the white of their eyes, so even just a dark brown with a black dot could do wonders. I think the wings are very well done, they have a sense of life to them. And lastly, what are they standing on?

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Re: New Work

Postby aakritiarts » Tue May 08, 2012 3:48 am

Thanks Auro for the feedback.
I'll work on the things you stated. The birds are standing on the shore (I guess). I painted it using a photograph taken by a friend.
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