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My First Portraits...

Postby Saul Rojas » Sat Apr 24, 2010 1:25 am

Ok Guys... I have being drawing all my life just for fun, and my nemesis allways were the portraits... I don´t have any trainings or studies in Art... I just do it for fun... I recently start to draw portraits and i decide to start with something classic, so here it is... Just be honest and tell me what you think... Technical advises are wellcome....
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Postby artisticsha » Sat Apr 24, 2010 11:41 am

Actually, its not bad at all. I like it alot. You have a good sense of light and dark. I also have had no formal training. You just keep going and you get better and better. Good Luck!
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Postby johnwalkeasy » Sat Apr 24, 2010 5:33 pm

Well, this is very good work. And you do have a great base to learn and get better. Training in drawing will be a good thing for you to have. I see an issue or so with this work. The forhead, right above the eyes seems a little to light. And right above that area is a long dark shadow. And then light again. Ofcourse you may have drawn this from a picture. And that could be part of the picture. When we paint or draw useing a photo. We must take into account that almost any photo is not right. Most times evan real life is not right. As artist, we make it right. You have very good drawing skills. I would advise you to get all the training you can get. And your work can go from good to super good. Keep working, And good luck.
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Postby Saul Rojas » Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:12 pm

Thank Guys... John, thanks for the advise...!! I´m posting another one... Maybe you could check it out and let me know what do you think... Again, Thank...! Hope for others to comment this pic too...
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Re: My First Portraits...

Postby davidstar » Tue Aug 30, 2011 8:09 am

This is a very good work
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