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Postby weirdpuckett » Tue Sep 02, 2008 1:51 pm

Hey rveryone..thanks for all the feedback on this..I decided that there was just too much white in the picture,so I just knocked it down a bit...I like the result as I think it calms the picture down a bit...Do you agree?
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Postby arlynnhr » Tue Sep 02, 2008 3:31 pm

Yes, I think it did! It's easier to make out the figures in the front of the drawing.
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Postby william » Tue Sep 02, 2008 6:21 pm

Foreground stands out nicely now. Excellent work. Impressive, most impressive
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Postby Michael Ortega » Thu Sep 04, 2008 11:13 am

Texture overwhelms this drawing. This should be used a a teaching tool on how to create a textured work. For the most part I do like this...but I do lose the insect in all the white noise...an area or two of complete black and an area two of white would make this a little less overwhelming...

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