by Erika Takacs » Sat Feb 23, 2008 12:27 am
John, very good job. I love what youd did with her shoulders and neck, and her face is nice. Somehow you preserved your John-style from your earlier works which is good, because it's so unique. Keep that if you can. The only drawback is the background. I'm not sure about the yellow tiles. They shift the focus off her face. Other than that, your hard work is paying off. Good for you.