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Postby ehoeveler » Tue Jan 22, 2008 5:44 am

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Postby Erika Takacs » Tue Jan 22, 2008 9:31 am

The first one is not as good as the second one. Maybe because I can't figure out what is it about. The second one is lovely with the warm colours, and I see a cityscape in it, with a tower. Good job, E, do more of these!
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Postby xxbreezy » Tue Jan 22, 2008 9:59 am

I agree..the second one is much better!! It does have that "city" look...I like it E!!!!
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Postby johnwalkeasy » Thu Jan 24, 2008 8:10 pm

Well, What I see here is coffins. The old kind. Ones you may have seen in the 1800.s. But, I guess, that,s what I would see. I like the 2nd one the best. Still coffins none the less. But I like coffins. It,s kind of like saying that,s it, I ant go take this mess no mor.
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Postby eagle1 » Thu Jan 24, 2008 10:56 pm

I have to agree with the rest of the replies about the second picture. I see a cityscape except I see it like an oriental city from the upper levels. Like China Town in S.F. The first picture is lacking something to define its presence.

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