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I would like your opinions on this painting.

Postby optionking » Fri Jan 11, 2008 5:32 pm

I did it several years ago. All of you gave me ideas on my other work. May be you can help me with this one. Thank You! :D
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Postby ehoeveler » Fri Jan 11, 2008 7:07 pm

I'm not good at critique-ing but I like the painting. E
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Postby jenn_iam » Mon Jan 14, 2008 2:03 pm

Are you wanting to change it?
I like its impressionistic feel... I think it has great color and movement.
It is great as it is...


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Postby optionking » Thu Jan 17, 2008 5:28 pm

I am not interested in changing it. But I am always open to suggestions.
Thank you for the wonderful comments.
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Postby johnwalkeasy » Thu Jan 17, 2008 7:13 pm

I like everything about it. The
ushwork and the light and shadow. And the way the girl is moving toward the viewer. Very good.
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Postby stanton » Fri Jan 18, 2008 5:14 pm

I like the painting...the style is unique. I see that it was done 5 years ago. Do you have anything recent that you could post here so we can see how your newer work compares?
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Postby optionking » Fri Jan 25, 2008 8:51 pm

Yes I had posted on be gentle forum I will post it again. I just did it about a month ago.
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Postby KarinPavlic » Fri Jan 25, 2008 9:51 pm

I very much like both of them.

The only suggestions that come in mind are:
1st painting: the right eye (wiewer side) is a bit 2 high
2nd painting: the naked body looks 2 pale/foged compared with clothes.
But that is just my opinion and I'm only human. ;)

Otherways they are great!
It is better to be hated for what you are than to be loved for what you are not.
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