Ted, This work looks very large. I guess because t,s so wide. I see two issues. One is the way the sun beams come down on the montains. They would look that way if they were casted on a hillside. But not on a montain. Also the water could have more details. And perhaps some lighter shades here and there. I like the montains in the background and the pink colors in the sky.
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