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I am ready for the fury

Postby ddt642 » Fri Aug 16, 2019 5:57 pm

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Re: I am ready for the fury

Postby Singular » Sun Aug 18, 2019 9:12 pm

Good work. There is a lot of good going on here. The colors are very good. Contrast is also good, with good depth. The one thing I would critique is the proportions. The face appears tp be a bit too small in comparison to the body. The neck is a bit elongated and the neck and trapezius area are a bit off. I would also like to see a bit more attentiona and detail in the hands.

Overall, nice work!
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Re: I am ready for the fury

Postby ddt642 » Sun Aug 18, 2019 10:05 pm

Thank you. You are right about everything. I think I concentrated on getting the face right and did not give enough attention to the rest of the body. Watercolor is a challenge for portraits especially for creating details.
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Re: I am ready for the fury

Postby ddt642 » Tue Oct 29, 2019 8:46 am

Thank You!
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Re: I am ready for the fury

Postby jenn_iam » Wed Oct 30, 2019 7:02 pm

Your rendition of Mona Lisa is 100% recognizable - has great colors and blending.... that said I also, second everything that singular noted. doing a person, can be hard where proportions are concerned. Keep practicing. Look at human anatomy and proportion notes. Even the old ones (text from Vitruvian man, DaVinci, talks about human proportions) Hope that helps.
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