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[scorpiofreak6]

Hello Im new on this site and was wondering if I could get some feedback on some of my works. i have mixed feelings about them, so I would like to get some critique that isnt from my friends or family and doesnt know me personally! Feel free to critique any other one of my pieces. Thanks Angela

[jenn_iam]

Hi Angela, you have a very retro style, which some times can be refreshing. Your color choices are bold, but do not clash in a way that is distracting which is good. Overall, I think your composition and focal point is good, I personally do not care for the arrows, I would have preferred the vine-like curls as you have above better. To me the arrows are a bit out of place. From the image it looks like you have fairly good line quality. The image may be suffering from a bit of degradation, but if not then a little clean up on the areas where the colors blend rather (where there is no hard line transition between colors).

All in all, it's very good. You have a good eye for design, look forward to more.

[scorpiofreak6]

Thanks so much, I have had mixed reviews on the arrow, and I agree, live and learn, I was using glass paint and t-shirt paint to do the edges of the flowers and other areas and the glass paint was more transparent than i had hoped and ran a lot. Thanks for the feed back appreciate it!.