Hi Angela, you have a very retro style, which some times can be refreshing. Your color choices are bold, but do not clash in a way that is distracting which is good. Overall, I think your composition and focal point is good, I personally do not care for the arrows, I would have preferred the vine-like curls as you have above better. To me the arrows are a bit out of place. From the image it looks like you have fairly good line quality. The image may be suffering from a bit of degradation, but if not then a little clean up on the areas where the colors blend rather (where there is no hard line transition between colors).
All in all, it's very good. You have a good eye for design, look forward to more.
May your world be painted in the
Brightest of colors!
**Artist / Illustrator**