I like it why have you taken so long in picking up the
I think the part you are missing is the tonal effect (the light & dark). In her hair it only seems to be one colour but if you look at peoples hair its a couple of shades. Her face just needs a little highlighting really light tones just under her eyes and top of her cheeks and the round part on the chin and dont forget a little shadow under her skirt
Overall you have a great painting you have the majority of the painting right just missing that variety in tone. Look at Klaus Engel - Erin which is a really good painting of the tones on the face should give you an idea what I mean
Never put yourself down. I understand where you are coming from I was told I was crap art by my art teacher and I only picked up the
ush again two years ago and I now have a 3 month exhibition.
You never know where it will take you just enjoy the learning curve and wing it thats what I do and the
ush will flow
Deanne Show us some more art and keep posting xx